Post by Papi on Nov 6, 2017 11:08:29 GMT -5
Hello, am here to give my take on these because Derpo is always busy.
Technique Name: Clothes Beam (Assault Edition Update)
Detailed Description: Through the act of carefully planned magic clothes, you opponent can be swamped by the feeling of extreme weights to the point of being immobilized! The user maximizes their Magical Materialization to force summon on extremely heavy weights onto your opponent. Depending on the size of the weights depends on the effect of it. Small Weights take off 10% of the enemy's AGI total and are as strong as half the user's end PL. Medium Weights take of 30% of the enemy's AGI total and are as strong as the total of the user's end PL. Finally, Super Heavy Weights take off 70% of the enemy's AGI total and are as strong as 1.5x the user's end PL. However, Super Heavy weights have a timer, unlike the other weights. They last a maximum of 2 posts on the opponent before becoming Small Weights and can be removed. Also, the user can also do the normal Clothes Beam effect of summoning clothes at will through magic. This can take on any form that is logical and possible.
Charge: (Requires Magical Materialization to use) 3 posts for Small Weights, 5 posts for Medium Weights, and 12 posts for Super Heavy Weights.
Cooldown: 10 posts no matter the size.
Cost: (Idk but I know sure as hell it'll be in Zeni)
So, how does the opponent go about getting rid of these weights?
Price would probably be somewhere around 13 to 15 Zeni.
Technique Name: Gender Beam/Sex Beam
Detailed Description: Through the ancient arts of Amazonian magic that has been taught through tablets from a long lost civilization, Edgy has resurrected a long since dead magic that seems to only work for female magicians. The user can direct their mentality on a single person in the world, taking a moment to look over their full body, before changing their sex on it's axis! Males become Females, and vise versa. Species without sexes are able to be decided upon. If the victim wishes their non-sex character to suddenly have one due to the attack, they may do so. If they do, then they may pick the sex or gender they so wish (within reason. No Godzillas with tits). The effects of the change have to possible endings. Either waiting out the 10 post time that the enemy is changed, or reversing it by focusing (not battling) for 2 posts. The user may also negate the ability at any time on their victims to add in a flavor to it. For some reason, this ability has trouble working on Androids or Mechanical people in general as their internals cannot change by it, only their appearance and functionality. Thus, when an android or mechanical person is changed (besides small mechanics), they are stunned for 2 posts with minor unintentional wounds.
Charge: 1 post of charge
Cooldown: 15 posts
Cost: (Idk but I know sure as hell it'll be in Zeni)
Can the opponent avoid this attack? It is implied through the beam wording, but it never explicitly states that the user fires a beam of any sort in the description.
I'll give it a 10 Zeni cost.
Technique Name: Misogyny Bomb
Detailed Description: A very special and peculiar weapon of a magic attack made by Edgy, this blast is an attempt at replicating the effects of similar Ki attacks, forming a massive ball of energy above her head out of magic. This ball is targeted to deal specific damage to women and women only. Any man touched by this bomb would merely pass through it unaffected. Women, however, are damaged severely. It deals x10 the user's PL in damage to the woman hit, and it explodes to deal throw damage as well. This move is specifically designed after the unsavory encounter with Ib and Azazel by Edgy, though her magic was not nearly strong enough, she now could stand up to such a beast on the field of combat.
Charge: 5 Posts
Cooldown: 25 posts
Cost: (Idk but I know sure as hell it'll be in Zeni)
This is OP. From the words of the "tech god" himself:
and in that instance, the technique dealt 10 X FOC, not 10 x PL. 10 x PL is beyond insane, even if it can only hit women (which, when paired with the gender bending attack, could basically be anybody). 8 x FOC would be more fair and that's still pretty wild considering the only caveat is the gender of the opponent.
price 24 zeni
Deception Prevention: An odd ability gained through intensive mind studies after her encounter with Nexon, Edgy can secretly focus unharmful magic into someone during a peaceful encounter (non-battles) and force them to unknowingly commit to telling only truths. Any attempt at lying or fabricating the truth rather forces the person to speak out the complete truth whether they notice or not. This can be discovered by those with extensive knowledge of mental magic, but requires active manipulation magic to stop it (such as mental protection magic).
Charge: None
Cooldown: Passive
Cost: I'm gonna say 5 Zeni?
Does this work through mind blocking techniques and such? Even if not, this technique looks good.
5 Zeni is good.
Voodoo (Who Do?): An ability of black earthling magic origin, where the user secretly binds the soul of the enemy to an inanimate object and harms it to cause harm to the person, mostly in annoying ways at least. This technique works exactly once per topic, and must be charged for 2 posts. Upon charging, the user focuses on the target (in visual range), before then looking at the doll (or whatever it is) and pushing their magic into it, forming a slight bond to the object and the victim. Whatever damage happens to the object does the equivilence of the person being hit hard by said object, merely being annoying or slightly searingly painful, but never causing damage or death. This is mainly used to fuck around with people IC when they are least expecting it. The effect of a Voodoo Doll goes over in threads, so you can use a previously activated one on someone in a later thread, but either the doll or the person dying stops the effects. If the doll is destroyed, the person just feels a migraine and weakness for a post, but nothing severe. This has no combat ability.
Charge: Two posts
Cooldown: One use per topic
Cost: I'm gonna say 5 Zeni again?
I think there should be a little more to the set-up than just looking at somebody. Maybe physical contact (of any sort) or something of the like.
5 Zeni is also good here.
Technique Name: Clothes Beam (Assault Edition Update)
Detailed Description: Through the act of carefully planned magic clothes, you opponent can be swamped by the feeling of extreme weights to the point of being immobilized! The user maximizes their Magical Materialization to force summon on extremely heavy weights onto your opponent. Depending on the size of the weights depends on the effect of it. Small Weights take off 10% of the enemy's AGI total and are as strong as half the user's end PL. Medium Weights take of 30% of the enemy's AGI total and are as strong as the total of the user's end PL. Finally, Super Heavy Weights take off 70% of the enemy's AGI total and are as strong as 1.5x the user's end PL. However, Super Heavy weights have a timer, unlike the other weights. They last a maximum of 2 posts on the opponent before becoming Small Weights and can be removed. Also, the user can also do the normal Clothes Beam effect of summoning clothes at will through magic. This can take on any form that is logical and possible.
Charge: (Requires Magical Materialization to use) 3 posts for Small Weights, 5 posts for Medium Weights, and 12 posts for Super Heavy Weights.
Cooldown: 10 posts no matter the size.
Cost: (Idk but I know sure as hell it'll be in Zeni)
So, how does the opponent go about getting rid of these weights?
Price would probably be somewhere around 13 to 15 Zeni.
Technique Name: Gender Beam/Sex Beam
Detailed Description: Through the ancient arts of Amazonian magic that has been taught through tablets from a long lost civilization, Edgy has resurrected a long since dead magic that seems to only work for female magicians. The user can direct their mentality on a single person in the world, taking a moment to look over their full body, before changing their sex on it's axis! Males become Females, and vise versa. Species without sexes are able to be decided upon. If the victim wishes their non-sex character to suddenly have one due to the attack, they may do so. If they do, then they may pick the sex or gender they so wish (within reason. No Godzillas with tits). The effects of the change have to possible endings. Either waiting out the 10 post time that the enemy is changed, or reversing it by focusing (not battling) for 2 posts. The user may also negate the ability at any time on their victims to add in a flavor to it. For some reason, this ability has trouble working on Androids or Mechanical people in general as their internals cannot change by it, only their appearance and functionality. Thus, when an android or mechanical person is changed (besides small mechanics), they are stunned for 2 posts with minor unintentional wounds.
Charge: 1 post of charge
Cooldown: 15 posts
Cost: (Idk but I know sure as hell it'll be in Zeni)
Can the opponent avoid this attack? It is implied through the beam wording, but it never explicitly states that the user fires a beam of any sort in the description.
I'll give it a 10 Zeni cost.
Technique Name: Misogyny Bomb
Detailed Description: A very special and peculiar weapon of a magic attack made by Edgy, this blast is an attempt at replicating the effects of similar Ki attacks, forming a massive ball of energy above her head out of magic. This ball is targeted to deal specific damage to women and women only. Any man touched by this bomb would merely pass through it unaffected. Women, however, are damaged severely. It deals x10 the user's PL in damage to the woman hit, and it explodes to deal throw damage as well. This move is specifically designed after the unsavory encounter with Ib and Azazel by Edgy, though her magic was not nearly strong enough, she now could stand up to such a beast on the field of combat.
Charge: 5 Posts
Cooldown: 25 posts
Cost: (Idk but I know sure as hell it'll be in Zeni)
This is OP. From the words of the "tech god" himself:
Jul 7, 2017 8:53:52 GMT -5 @Sanctimonious Asshat said:
Drop it to a x8, even as a finisher a x10 is INSANEand in that instance, the technique dealt 10 X FOC, not 10 x PL. 10 x PL is beyond insane, even if it can only hit women (which, when paired with the gender bending attack, could basically be anybody). 8 x FOC would be more fair and that's still pretty wild considering the only caveat is the gender of the opponent.
price 24 zeni
Deception Prevention: An odd ability gained through intensive mind studies after her encounter with Nexon, Edgy can secretly focus unharmful magic into someone during a peaceful encounter (non-battles) and force them to unknowingly commit to telling only truths. Any attempt at lying or fabricating the truth rather forces the person to speak out the complete truth whether they notice or not. This can be discovered by those with extensive knowledge of mental magic, but requires active manipulation magic to stop it (such as mental protection magic).
Charge: None
Cooldown: Passive
Cost: I'm gonna say 5 Zeni?
Does this work through mind blocking techniques and such? Even if not, this technique looks good.
5 Zeni is good.
Voodoo (Who Do?): An ability of black earthling magic origin, where the user secretly binds the soul of the enemy to an inanimate object and harms it to cause harm to the person, mostly in annoying ways at least. This technique works exactly once per topic, and must be charged for 2 posts. Upon charging, the user focuses on the target (in visual range), before then looking at the doll (or whatever it is) and pushing their magic into it, forming a slight bond to the object and the victim. Whatever damage happens to the object does the equivilence of the person being hit hard by said object, merely being annoying or slightly searingly painful, but never causing damage or death. This is mainly used to fuck around with people IC when they are least expecting it. The effect of a Voodoo Doll goes over in threads, so you can use a previously activated one on someone in a later thread, but either the doll or the person dying stops the effects. If the doll is destroyed, the person just feels a migraine and weakness for a post, but nothing severe. This has no combat ability.
Charge: Two posts
Cooldown: One use per topic
Cost: I'm gonna say 5 Zeni again?
I think there should be a little more to the set-up than just looking at somebody. Maybe physical contact (of any sort) or something of the like.
5 Zeni is also good here.